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Wrong Turn

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The car rocked as it passed over potholes. I stared out of the window watching the trees go by

“Are you going to sit and stare out of the window for the whole of this journey?” Jessica complained taking her eyes off the road for a split second.
“She’s probably missing that guy she likes to talk to, what was his name” Ellie began to tease. I glared at her for a moment
“El, what are you talking about?” I stupidly asked knowing the answer.

“You know who I’m talking about” she began to smile, a very wide smile. I felt my face burn with embarrassment. “See! I knew it!” she pointed at my blush, just what I need.  We were interrupted by a deafening bang.
“Jess, what was that?” I asked with panic racing through me. The car rolled into a stop.
“Well, that would be a flat.” She explained trying not to sound spooked. She brushed her long blonde hair from her face and un-clipped her seat belt.
“I’ll go see how bad it is, maybe we can push?” she sounded sarcastic to me, not the time or place for that.        

I and Ellie sat uncomfortably while she looked, after a few brief moments her head appeared
“Well?” I asked hoping it wasn’t too bad, she sighed and shook her head.
“Oh how fucking amazing!” Ellie yelled slumping in the backseat
“Calm down El, we’ll just walk. There’s got to be a town or something nearby” I tried to reassure no one was paying much attention. I un-clipped the seat belt to take a look. When I looked my eyes widened, stuck in the wheel was a bear trap. But what was it doing here? “How the hell?” I mumbled. I thought about it from then on, I couldn’t take my mind off it something just felt…familiar. I shrugged it off; “come on you guys, we should just walk I’m sure they’ll be a town somewhere nearby” I again reassured.

                They huffed and puffed like the big bad wolf, only I was the bad guy. They slowly grabbed their bags as I did mine, as much as I hated to walk miles and miles we had no choice. I knew it would be especially difficult as Jessica packed her bag for every occasion thought possible, and I’m not talking emergencies that people would think important. Things like make up spare shoes and outfit ‘just in case’ not to mention she carries a nail kit just in case she breaks one.

    On this particular day we were headed to see some of our friends that for the holidays go out to an old log cabin, and they had invited us to stay with them for a few days. As always Jess was never dressed appropriate, a denim skirt which I might add was never near her knees and a white strappy top followed by a peach see through on top, my guess that undershirt won’t be on long once where there. As always she wore flip flops with the weather I understand, but where we’re going I don’t think they’ll do her much good. On the other hand there was Ellie wearing a trendy top and tight jeans, she unlike Jessica had the sense to wear canvas shoes.

As for me, simple jeans, white patterned t-shirt with red jacket and trainers would do. I never really dressed to impress, I never saw the point in that. And I always came equipped with a first aid kit, out here there’s no hospital for miles and so it’s best to have something that will help rather than nothing at all. I took lead seems as I had the map, as I walked the strange feeling came back, it was as if I’d walked this path before;
“Hey you two” I began turning round to face them “does any of this seem familiar to you?” I asked judging by the faces they pulled they thought I was insane or something
“Are you kidding?” Ellie looked confused but at the same time angry “we have never been here before this is the first time they have invited us” they stood staring at me, I knew it was the first time but how come it looks so familiar? This is a major case of déjà vu. 
Story based off of the film 'Wrong Turn'
The hill billies belong to the creators of Wrong turn
The other characters belong to me
If your not a horror fan then the up coming chapters aren't for you
© 2013 - 2024 KeyaraHedgehog09
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IPartyAnimal's avatar
Awesome start.